2012年5月16日星期三

Blog 13 rewriter "Mon, Dad, Buy the Broccoli"

In our world, there are most food and beverage manufactucers. People like them very much because they are delicious. But the beverage isn't good for people. Therefore, the company should products for any ways.

In the article "Mon, Dad, Buy the Broccoli" that said: "The commercials selling empty calories like candy and soft drinks to children have gotten so out of control in recent years that now even the food industry has taken notice." The drink is delicious just because have candy and soft that haven't any nutritions. For now, people began attach importance to children's growing. They know their children cannot eat more junk foods. the company in order to keep work. They should promotes healthier food for people. For example, Chinese KFC is different American KFC. American KFC just have chicken nuggets, but Chinese KFC except chicken nuggets that also have hamburger, rice, and noodle. I think that is meeting the chinese people's needing. Some people don't like fast food, but their friends like. At this time, they can eat together at KFC. Therefore, although the drink and food have more empty calories, they also promotes food own more nutritions.

Their drink and food advertising almost for under 12 agreed to like. If they want to fit children, their food and drink should have certain degree of protection. The company show promotes the food cleaning. Even the food is very raluable, it is unclean, when people eat, also is bad for belly. For example, I listen a news, but I was not sure that news is really. The KFC's chicken wings is very delicous. Every day would sell much, but where come from those chicken wings. The news said, the KFC's farm, the chilcken has six wings. When I listen this news, I can't believeable. We don't know the chicken is a monster. We don't the chicken health is good or not, and could eat. However, people also go to eat, and we don't check the news is really or not.

In conclusion, the children like to eat junk food, because they get tempted in advertising and the mind. If the company will keep their work, they should promote the food nutritions and cleaning.

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