Blog 13 rewriter "Mon, Dad, Buy the Broccoli"

In our world, there are most food and beverage manufactucers. People like them very much because they are delicious. But the beverage isn't good for people. Therefore, the company should products for any ways.

In the article "Mon, Dad, Buy the Broccoli" that said: "The commercials selling empty calories like candy and soft drinks to children have gotten so out of control in recent years that now even the food industry has taken notice." The drink is delicious just because have candy and soft that haven't any nutritions. For now, people began attach importance to children's growing. They know their children cannot eat more junk foods. the company in order to keep work. They should promotes healthier food for people. For example, Chinese KFC is different American KFC. American KFC just have chicken nuggets, but Chinese KFC except chicken nuggets that also have hamburger, rice, and noodle. I think that is meeting the chinese people's needing. Some people don't like fast food, but their friends like. At this time, they can eat together at KFC. Therefore, although the drink and food have more empty calories, they also promotes food own more nutritions.

Their drink and food advertising almost for under 12 agreed to like. If they want to fit children, their food and drink should have certain degree of protection. The company show promotes the food cleaning. Even the food is very raluable, it is unclean, when people eat, also is bad for belly. For example, I listen a news, but I was not sure that news is really. The KFC's chicken wings is very delicous. Every day would sell much, but where come from those chicken wings. The news said, the KFC's farm, the chilcken has six wings. When I listen this news, I can't believeable. We don't know the chicken is a monster. We don't the chicken health is good or not, and could eat. However, people also go to eat, and we don't check the news is really or not.

In conclusion, the children like to eat junk food, because they get tempted in advertising and the mind. If the company will keep their work, they should promote the food nutritions and cleaning.

Blog Entry 12: Responding to a Factory Farming Issue

Water pollution

The water is very important for our lives. Every people can't leave water, but in our world the water pillution is very fearl. Industrial agriculture is one of the leading causes of water pollution in the United States today. We should protect water resources.

On the farm, people can save water and not waste of fertilizer application. Global warming, resources in the reduction, clean water and less, recycling is becoming more important. As for water pollution, if you can do, try recycle water like you can help to promote healthier waterways while showing that you do not support the environmental recklessness practiced by industrial farms.

And then, people should make plan to use water. Analysis of the water, and planned water use reason, use local and water consumption. First, determine water sources and water costs. Then, fill in the detailed list of water. Third, calculate how much water is used. fourthm compare different efficiency of water using. After, development of a more perfect water plan. Last, recovery and rewatment of waste water.

Blog Entry 11: Summarizing The Meatrix

The Meartrix shows us about in now farm, animal cruelty, Animal don't get a good take care. Businessmen in order to make more money, they make farm to live in more animals. But when the more animal live together, the sanitation have problem. Nobody clean farm, then, they use Antibiotic resistant germs to take care of animal. And get massive pollution. Those complications take destroyed communities. In the cow farm, businessmen are antibiotic over use that take cow to produce more mlik. And they use artificial hormones that take cow frow fast, because people use more and more hormone, some cow get mad cow disease. In the factory, the job also is dagerous. The worker maybe happen any accident. For meat, add manure inside in order the meat looks good and crisp.

Blog Entry 10: tutoring

I feel good for tutor because this is one by one to teach, and let me know I have any insufficient.

Like for the introduction, I always think just write the summarize and the thesis, but tutor told me that I should write something to intriduction for topic. I think that is very improtant because the imperfect form that is a big problem for the essay.

Blog Entry 9: Argument Essay

Red oill or Blue pill

Blog Entry 8 think about futher

Red Pill or Blue Pill? Morpheus offers Neo a choice: take the Blue Pill and go back to your life or take the Red Pill and “see how far down the rabbit hole goes” (a reference to the book Alice in Wonderland, where a little girl discovers an insane, and often horrifying, alternate universe). Which would you choose? To discover the truth no matter how terrible, or to stick to what you know?

The chooice about the pills that is for their symbolic significance in this case. This problem asks us the truth and the truth is worth pursuing. The blue pill will enable us to maintain the status quo, continue to live in the composition of a habit and we believe the true life. We had a moist, do not need the truth to live. It symbolizes the daily commute. The red pill is an unknown quantity. We were told that it can help us find the truth. We do not know what is the truth do not even know the tablets Can we find it. The red pill symbolizes risk, doubt, and doubt. To answer this question, you can bet your entire life and the world you have never experienced fact. I think I also will to choose red pill. Although I am afraid to change more things, in order to know the truth, I also think I need to accept and to do something to know.

Blog Entry 7 Rewrite

The Dangers of Reality TV

In the TV, people like to show their reality things to other people. Some people like it becuase they can learn other people's experiences to avoid the same mistake. Some people don't like it because they easy to copy and then forgot what do they want.
According to Timothy Sexton in "The Dangers of Reality TV" Reality TV adds some unsound information. Reality TV makes people believe that competition helps people to success and that the good image is more important than people's ability. Reality TV is making people think that education is unnecessary. Those messages are harmful to young minds. I agree with the author that reality TV is dangerous for people because there is much information that takes people to lose themselves and the information is so much that it becomes harmful.

In the TV, there are ads, news, and shows that talk about everything, and they make people think they want more and more. Although the things that people want can improve their lives and make them consume, they can put pressure on people. For example my uncle is a worker who watched business shows on TV. The more he looked at  successful people, he  thought he could do the same as those succusseful people who  through opportunities and hard work,  they got susseccful. Then, he gave up his office job to be a businessman. But he didn't know how to be a businessman that isnot really good for him. He thought that he looked at more shows and understand other people to be successful ways. So he did his business very biger. At last, he lost. However, he didn't know what was he wanted.

I think everything has their quantity. When people look more and more reality TV, they will remember the reality TV informations, and use it in the life and society. When people face more Choices, they maybe choice wrong way because of reality TV information to change the life. For example, When I come the United States, I didn;t understand anything. My grandma recommended me to go Long Island Business Institute because there are more ads in TV. But some father friends told me to take English class, or go to high school first. In their disputing, I was profase in more time. Therefore, people shoud through right way to got more right information.

In conclusion, reality TV has more unsound information. Prople should learn to differentiate things right and wrong, and understand what they want that help people to get beautiful life.